Hi everyone. I'm trying to translate three phrases from English to Old Norse. I've already done some work but I need some sort of a verification. Can somebody tell me how right my translation is?
English:
Out of mother's deep womb,
into the green world.
Die and be reborn.
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Old Norse:
Af móður vagga
í grǿnn heimr
Deyja ok verð
I've changed "womb" to "cradle" because I couldn't find such word in the Old Norse dictionary.
Also, where needed, all (I guess all) the forms are changed from Nominative to others.
Thank you.